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Thursday, September 3, 2015

What is a ...... star?

I chose to put this post up because it shows my learning and how I used metaphors and alliteration. We were making poems of our own and learning how to use metaphors. We compared it to other stuff that were similar to our thoughts. I enjoyed trying to build up some interesting vocab to make the poem sound amazing.  What I found challenging was comparing the stars with other objects. But I combat it by thinking hard or just getting help from a friend.

What is a star?

The star is a light,
thrown in the sky.

It is a bouncy blue ball of fire,
sparkling with excitement to explode the plain sky.

The star is a spark,
Zooming across for wishes.
It is a cookie,
That has been shot from a cannon.

The star is a flower,
Grown with petals.

It is a silver lightning,
striking with anger.

The star is a campfire,
lit up with ferocious ashes.

It is the youngest sister,
glistening with brightness.





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