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Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Breakfast

In room 3 our task was to persuade others and our entire school to go to breakfast club. I chose this to put up because I never knew that breakfast was so important but by the time I learnt more about it, I started eating breakfast every morning. I enjoyed writing about my ideas and working with my friends. I found using the voice typing complicated because it kept on typing the wrong word. I overcame it by editing it and fixing my mistakes. I checked with my 3 friends before checking my teacher.

                                       Why is breakfast so important??


 My name is Lucy and I am a student from Wesley Primary.I am writing to say that people should eat breakfast. It is healthy and very good for you and your body.


Firstly  people and children should eat breakfast because it helps you concentrate a lot on your work and learning instead of thinking about food and being hungry. Some children can lose their memory when they don’t have an early lunch.

Secondly breakfast is good because it really helps to not put on any more weight. If you don’t have anything to eat in the morning you will be so hungry you will eat heaps in the afternoon. You are putting more weight in your body. By the time you eat breakfast you wouldn’t be so hungry.

The last reason why breakfast is very important because it will give you less trips to the nurse. It is affecting your learning because you are absent from school just to go to the doctors with your sore stomach. It is wasting the nurses time trying to figure out the the problem in your stomach. But really you are just hungry.

In my opinion, I believe that is why breakfast is good for you.

3 comments:

  1. Good persuading Lucy. I like your conclusion. How do you think you could improve it?

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